I love this pose. It is really dynamic. I also love the pale touch of color. I think the hair should be shaded more. It'll look more detailed and less like clouds. The ribbons around her could use more touching up too.
really nice! Awesome job on the pose. Just a very small critique (for you to maybe think about in future stuff) is that I think her torso is just a touch to long particularly along the space between her ribs and hips and there's a couple other anatomy things that I seem a little off like the way her arms are bending but other than that, it's really great